Peer review: feedback

My first image I was going with:

I decided to post it like my other work to see what sort of feedback I could get, and to see if anyone had any ideas that I could introduce into my work that I havent thought of.

After the feedback I recieved from nathan, I began to make my edits to my work. I believe this feedback was rather positive and I believe helped improve the drawings I was working on. Here is the final piece after recieving the feedback: